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Disappointing so far.
The writing is bad. It feels a bit like the author held her breath and wrote well for the first chapter, then relaxed into a lower quality from there on out. Or maybe I was giving her the benefit of the doubt at first, wanting to enjoy the book.
The writing so far is immature and most similar to those block illustration romances that are everywhere these days. Frustrating - get to the point.
— Oct 22, 2025 11:29PM
The writing is bad. It feels a bit like the author held her breath and wrote well for the first chapter, then relaxed into a lower quality from there on out. Or maybe I was giving her the benefit of the doubt at first, wanting to enjoy the book.
The writing so far is immature and most similar to those block illustration romances that are everywhere these days. Frustrating - get to the point.

