Sydney Cardoza’s Reviews > Taken by the Dark Elf King > Status Update

Wow this is… not good. That’s one of the most jarring time skips I’ve read. Maybe make it a little more of a slow burn? Also that the dark elves cant do a certain sex thing without a specific scenario is really fucking weird? I mean I guess it’s an excuse for certain things to happen but like, you don’t need one? Fuckin’ weird.