Mike’s Reviews > The Ministry of Witches: A Cozy Fantasy Novel > Status Update
Mike
is 11% done
Well edited so far, but with one glaring exception: excess commas between adjectives. I counted 40 in the first 10% of the book. Most authors slip in a few, but this is just dire. "Single," for instance, never needs a comma after it.
— Oct 31, 2025 12:18AM
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Mike
is 32% done
Clearly set in the Harry Potter universe, without authorization (I assume), and risking an easily avoided lawyer's letter.
Multiple chapters should begin with the word "the," but oddly do not.
And the archivist has a big flashing neon sign above his head that says "Enemies to Lovers."
— Oct 31, 2025 03:15PM
Multiple chapters should begin with the word "the," but oddly do not.
And the archivist has a big flashing neon sign above his head that says "Enemies to Lovers."
