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Well intended meta-ness that made me cringe:
Before I could finish my sentence, a tall, handsome vampire flung me over his
shoulder.
“We will continue this conversation in private.”
“Help! I think my husband is a vampire!” I laughed and pounded on the backs of his thighs.
— Nov 01, 2025 05:52AM
Before I could finish my sentence, a tall, handsome vampire flung me over his
shoulder.
“We will continue this conversation in private.”
“Help! I think my husband is a vampire!” I laughed and pounded on the backs of his thighs.
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All that was left of the firedrake was a tingling sensation in my ribs that told me somehow she was inside me, waiting until I needed her. With the weight of this nest heavily inside me, I fell to my knees and the branch clattered to the floor. The witches rushed forward.
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All that was left of the firedrake was a tingling sensation in my ribs that told me somehow she was inside me, waiting until I needed her. With the weight of this nest heavily inside me, I fell to my knees and the branch clattered to the floor. The witches rushed forward.
Goody Alsop reached me first, her thin arms reaching around...
“If I were a human woman and not a witch, that growly sound you just made would make me swoon. I’d be all yours, and you could have your way with me.” I giggled.
“You’re already all mine,” Matthew reminded me, depositing me on the bed. “I’m changing this ridiculous plot, by the way. In the interests of originality—not to mention verisimilitude—we’re skipping dinner and moving right on to the date.”
“Readers would love a vampire who said that!” I said.
(Diana Bishop, I disagree completely)