Alice’s Reviews > Tales of a Monstrous Heart > Status Update

I've never read a book in recent memory that abused verbs and misplaced modifiers this much. I love the vibes, but the grammar aint it

There are still bits of prose that jump out at me every so often that I really adore. I really want this to be good, but the next 260 pages have to do some heavy lifting

I love the concept of this story but the grammar… where was the editor?? Too many sentence fragments and gerunds. I also think the beginning was very strong, but the plots getting lost in all the scenes written to set up Emrys praising Kat.

It’s so good

idk why the rating is so low i really enjoy this so far