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Not a bad read so far. Interesting world, neat plot.
Small problem: We've met three female characters of any note. The 'psycho bitch' manipulative ex who shows up when she's on the rebound and exists to pummel our MC's ego, the 'useless bitch' middle-management lady who appears to exist to thwart our MC's work, and the love interest who has thus far played the damsel in distress thrice and been trap-bait twice.
— Dec 18, 2016 02:54AM
Small problem: We've met three female characters of any note. The 'psycho bitch' manipulative ex who shows up when she's on the rebound and exists to pummel our MC's ego, the 'useless bitch' middle-management lady who appears to exist to thwart our MC's work, and the love interest who has thus far played the damsel in distress thrice and been trap-bait twice.
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