Marie’s Reviews > Saving Cassie > Status Update
Marie
is 22% done
Though there are some jarring editing issues, like sudden POV changes between characters and a jump from third person to first person, the story is interesting.
— Dec 20, 2016 11:38AM
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Marie
is 60% done
Argh, I just can't like these characters. And rehashing every event after it happens with everyone around Cassie is having me skip whole paragraphs to get back to the story.
— Dec 22, 2016 09:37AM
Marie
is 55% done
Kind of annoying that every time Logan kisses Cassie she "feels it down to her toes." Every. Time.
— Dec 21, 2016 05:57PM
Marie
is 50% done
Dialogue and repetition carry so many of these chapters. I need facial expressions, emotions, body language. I need to like these characters.
— Dec 20, 2016 10:47PM
Marie
is 36% done
Lots of telling, little showing. I want to really feel the characters!
— Dec 20, 2016 12:25PM