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Maïssane is on page 58 of 574

this back and forth in POVs is making it difficult to breath and discover this world alongside the fmc. it would’ve been better to let her enter the academy, makes sure things are rolling for her and then introduce the mmc’s pov.
also, each of their pov contains quite the amount of informations, my brain is overworked and reading these last 30 pages felt like a 100 😭

— 17 hours, 50 min ago