J S’s Reviews > Grim and Oro > Status Update
J S
is 10% done
This pacing is some of the worst I have read. We have jumped 25 years in the span of 20 pages. We get a page of build-up for a battle that we never see, just are told "Oh, it's over now" in the very next line. Grim and Oro are both still obnoxious, but at least Isla isn't here
— Nov 07, 2025 07:44PM
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J S
is 50% done
Just finished Grim's half of it, and my biggest question is: What was the point of literally any of that?
— Nov 09, 2025 12:09PM
J S
is 33% done
There is a fine line between love and stalkerish obsession. Grim uses that line like a jump rope.
— Nov 08, 2025 12:19PM
