Jules’s Reviews > The Fortune Hunter > Status Update

No because the part where the old man fell off his horse and died actually destroyed me. He just wanted to ride, because the biggest fear a rider has is the day they can’t anymore. So, he did—and died doing the one thing he loved. Beautiful, devastating, and Sad. And Of course, Charlotte was crying. I was too and it's a book, that isn't even real. This part has me acting like I attended the funeral. (Like HELP)

I like it so far, it’s very nicely done and you can see the thought put into it right now, I really like the hilarious name “Chicken” and all the others that just don’t seem to be able to be actual names.