Crystal Jenkins’s Reviews > Immortal Dark > Status Update

This book has me feeling like a yo-yo. I’ll be enjoying it for a while and then the author says something that makes little sense, makes my brain trip and takes me out of the story, or doesn’t complete a scene before moving to the next, making it feel like the writer was like “okay, I’m tired of writing this scene, that’s good enough.” 🤨 Going to finish it though.