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Zach
Zach is on page 268 of 308
“Anyway, I don’t like the idea of murdering the possible.” Great writing, somewhat tiring story. Sentence level remains strong, but you can see areas to revise. I love Carpenter’s tone, but I’m not sure you couldn’t get it from Hemingway.
Nov 09, 2025 06:59AM
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Zach
Zach is on page 215 of 308
Still shocking, sentences remain electric. I keep thinking Scott Galloway is famous for saying all these things about displaced young men and Carpenter wrote the novel about it in 66. Flawed, troubled characters as a product of their time.

Carpenter sure seems to be writing something postsecular even if, as an avowed atheist, he rejects org. religion. A sense of, “is that all there is?”, lingers throughout.
Nov 08, 2025 09:57AM
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Zach
Zach is on page 127 of 308
Each page is electric. The grammar is clean and sharp; the language is harsh. Carpenter can write bleeding sentences that cut you at the same time.
Nov 07, 2025 07:48AM
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Zach
Zach is on page 92 of 308
Nov 05, 2025 02:41PM
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Zach
Zach is on page 75 of 308
I only realized some friends of mine read this and didn’t enjoy it after starting, so I’m waiting for a shoe to drop.

But, as of right now, Carpenter’s incredibly skilled. I keep thinking of that Hemingway line of just writing one true sentence after another.

The Dostoevsky link is apt. No characters to emulate here, but unflinching depictions of people who’re the result of a cultural moment/ideology.
Nov 05, 2025 06:09AM
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