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AV
is 45% done
Why is he mansplaining her own people’s magic to her. Boy gtfo (Also this is an awful way to world build. Why can’t MC just think this to the reader instead.)
— 7 hours, 10 min ago
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AV
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Someone needs to stitch her mouth shut or cut her tongue out. I’m so serious.
— 3 hours, 53 min ago
AV
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“Whatever caused his outburst—“ It was not an outburst. Wtf. Did anyone bother opening a dictionary or googling synonyms for this goddamned book
— 5 hours, 32 min ago
AV
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“His expression smoothed into the mask I had learned to approach with extreme caution” Is bantering and yapping with your jailer and prince genocider extreme caution or
— 8 hours, 22 min ago
AV
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“Corrupt walls of Usr Jasad? What was she talking about?” Girl you literally admitted that your grandparents assassinated your dad (a foreign prince heir no less) and imprisoned your mother. What are YOU talking about?????
— 9 hours, 42 min ago
AV
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This girl got wayyyyy too comfortable wayyyyyyyyy too damn fast
— Nov 08, 2025 04:54PM
AV
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This whole “Mufsids/Urabi threat” makes no damn sense . . . 1) MC should’ve had knowledge/contact with them prior to understand why they’re no good (Discounting the possibility that Hanim was related to either group), 2) This should’ve been fully explained to the MC the first time she was captured and 3) MC’s choice to stay with Arin would be more understandable and desperate if she understood the threat
— Nov 08, 2025 03:44PM

