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Quick thoughts: 1) An editor is needed she thought silently to herself
2) The description of a 350 pound person with fried chicken trapped for weeks under their fat rolls is insanely offensive and logistically impossible. The author couldn’t even google what 350 pounds looks like?
3) The Protagonist is from San Francisco but keeps mentioning that the rainy weather of London is such a change. SF can also be rainy!
— Nov 10, 2025 06:02AM
2) The description of a 350 pound person with fried chicken trapped for weeks under their fat rolls is insanely offensive and logistically impossible. The author couldn’t even google what 350 pounds looks like?
3) The Protagonist is from San Francisco but keeps mentioning that the rainy weather of London is such a change. SF can also be rainy!
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