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Em Dalena
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There’s not much to say, nothing has changed. Everything is coming from nowhere.
— Nov 11, 2025 10:05AM
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Em Dalena
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I figured out what’s wrong with the writing! It’s tell don’t show. Pretty much no use of imagery at all. Mixed with it rushing through things so much…
— Nov 10, 2025 05:39PM
Em Dalena
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It feels like the author is so excited to get into certain details that she’s moving so fast and we are missing so much context as to why it’s important. I usually like when stories humor right in, but I feel like this could have benefitted from slowing down and giving some explanations.
— Nov 09, 2025 10:18AM
