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I'm obsessed with Damon, I want him to set the world on fire for me!
Noticed some continuity errors and some repeated descriptions close together too but still enjoying the story.
— Nov 12, 2025 12:16AM
Noticed some continuity errors and some repeated descriptions close together too but still enjoying the story.
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Nicollemac
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I've been sucked into this story, but I have thoughts.....
He's been described a few times but I don't know what she looks like?
Skirted over her injuries like an after thought but they were described like she was on death's door?
I don't know how many days/weeks into the story we are but she was plunging toilet water at the start and hasn't once had a shower.
Few descriptions repeated. Gone from shoes to boots
— Nov 11, 2025 01:25PM
He's been described a few times but I don't know what she looks like?
Skirted over her injuries like an after thought but they were described like she was on death's door?
I don't know how many days/weeks into the story we are but she was plunging toilet water at the start and hasn't once had a shower.
Few descriptions repeated. Gone from shoes to boots
