Lauralee Roos’s Reviews > Midnight Possession > Status Update

There are a couple of times when it seems like the author meant to edit parts of the story but left parts in so it awkwardly repeats and is confusing.

There is a real lack of attention to detail throughout the book. Example she’s handed peony flowers but when he gets there, they’re roses. That happens throughout with several things. Even the locket, it will be in her pocket but then she is wearing it.