Juliana Philippa’s Reviews > 'Twas the Night Before Scandal > Status Update

"Plump but friendly"? What's with the but? Since when are plump people known to not generally be friendly?

"Love. My God, He was being foolish. He’d known her for days. How could he even think such an idiotic thing?"

Yeah, my thoughts exactly. Not into this one. Strangers marry and fall in love in a day ...?!

Carol's mom cracks me up

There seem to be random misplaced commas. Weird.

"A man who’d see her enter a ballroom and then turn the other way. Literally. She wrinkled her nose. Quite rude. Not that she’d minded his disinterest, but it was still boorish, nonetheless."