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Tia Avery
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The plot so far is quite good but the writing is something I'm struggling with, it's giving 13y/o wattpad I'm hoping it improves
— Nov 14, 2025 04:20AM
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Tia Avery
is on page 167 of 338
Wheyyy on page 167 and there's already an L bomb dropped
— Nov 14, 2025 02:15PM
Tia Avery
is on page 10 of 338
"My eyes break open. 2 shattered windows filling my mouth with glass" not "my eyes snapped open, my mouth dried instantaneously, as though two windows had shattered, filling my mouth with its contents" ... No it was "2 shattered windows" I am struggling but must persevere
— Nov 13, 2025 10:28AM
Tia Avery
is on page 2 of 338
I'm only on page 2 and already cringing at the writing 😭 hoping it improves 🤞
— Nov 13, 2025 10:18AM

