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i genuinely haven't read a traditionally published book with such dogshit writing in such a long time and i'm only 5% in
— Nov 14, 2025 07:07AM
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Tiffany
is 39% done
it is so unrealistic for jack to have a snake tattoo... like obviously the rest of the book is unrealistic (a vc is interested in a half-baked idea dreamt up by 2 college juniors) but this takes the cake.
— Nov 14, 2025 11:09AM
Tiffany
is 4% done
"zoe looked up at jack's face, and found it was looking back."
first of all, why is there a comma? the second half of the sentence isn't a complete thought. second of all, why use "it" to refer to someone's face? i can't tell if using "it" in place of "he" is grammatically incorrect, but it just *feels* wrong (also this was a good example of when to use a comma correctly to separate two COMPLETE thoughts).
— Nov 14, 2025 07:03AM
first of all, why is there a comma? the second half of the sentence isn't a complete thought. second of all, why use "it" to refer to someone's face? i can't tell if using "it" in place of "he" is grammatically incorrect, but it just *feels* wrong (also this was a good example of when to use a comma correctly to separate two COMPLETE thoughts).
