Filipa Roque | Dev. Editor’s Reviews > The Shadow of Dawn > Status Update
Filipa Roque | Dev. Editor
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It hasn't been easy getting through this.
I'm super interested in the plot, but there's no showing, only telling, and every dialogue feels like an exposition of lore...
It's not captivating, at least for now. I'm really trying to like this book, though.
— Nov 16, 2025 07:04AM
I'm super interested in the plot, but there's no showing, only telling, and every dialogue feels like an exposition of lore...
It's not captivating, at least for now. I'm really trying to like this book, though.
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