Abby’s Reviews > From Blood and Ash > Status Update

Okay, I’m enjoying this. I understand people saying it reads like a first draft. It really does — the plot is very character-driven from scene to scene with no true direction. There’s way too much info dumping—it’s like a failed attempt at high fantasy. And the MC’s name is a tragedy. Penellaphe? 😭 a truly cursed maiden. It is now a joke in my life from henceforth. So I’m here for the ride! 😂