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Rachel
is on page 234 of 303
God, this book needs more drama. All the club and Christmas stuff went a little too well for Chloe. I kinda wish someone else got into her house instead of Jack. Spice things up a little. (Not that the smut isn't spicy, but it's so, like, surface-level kinky, if that makes sense? Very basic D/S stuff. I mean, besides the voyeur thing, but I kinda hated that scene. Bit of a turn-off as a social anxiety sufferer...)
— Nov 16, 2025 11:35PM
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Rachel
is on page 299 of 303
This book still kinda reads like a Hallmark movie but with smut and a sprinkling of dark romance themes thrown in. (Emphasis on "sprinkling".) It also really needs a better editor, 'cause in tonight's reading alone, I found a spelling error, multiple grammatical errors, and a sex scene that makes 0 mention of underwear being removed prior to penetration. I swear this book didn't even get proofread before publication.
— Nov 17, 2025 11:34PM
Rachel
is on page 104 of 303
Not Chloe making Hallmark references after I just did the same last night...
I have mixed feelings about the webcam star subplot. Honestly, the sexy stuff as a whole feels kinda... forced? Maybe because it's so imbalanced with all the cheesy Hallmark stuff and amateur stalking.
Tyler almost feels more like a creepy stalker than Jack does. And why is Jack still outside her house when he installed a camera?
— Nov 13, 2025 10:58PM
I have mixed feelings about the webcam star subplot. Honestly, the sexy stuff as a whole feels kinda... forced? Maybe because it's so imbalanced with all the cheesy Hallmark stuff and amateur stalking.
Tyler almost feels more like a creepy stalker than Jack does. And why is Jack still outside her house when he installed a camera?
Rachel
is on page 57 of 303
Jack seems like such an amateur stalker compared to Josh from Lights Out, LOL. But his gentlemanly fireman side has charmed me, so I guess I'll keep reading. (This feels kinda like a Hallmark-type story so far with just a dash of stalking. Disappointing, given the "dark romance" branding, but maybe it'll pick up with the smut?)
— Nov 12, 2025 10:53PM
