kinothy’s Reviews > In Between Darkness > Status Update
kinothy
is 12% done
this is unreadable. i can’t tell if it’s a high school writing project or ai slop- but omg. it feels like harry potter meets vampire academy but if they were recited from memory by an 11 year old… do not recommend
hoping that the author can revisit and rewrite in a few years because the premise is good, the magic system is interesting… but this is horribly written
— Nov 17, 2025 01:28PM
hoping that the author can revisit and rewrite in a few years because the premise is good, the magic system is interesting… but this is horribly written
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