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While a solid and engaging story, it has one fault that continued to disturb me: the highly repetitive use of 'practiced'. it was applied to 'ease', 'efficiency', 'stealth', 'precision', 'steps', and more, multiple times.
— Nov 18, 2025 01:59PM
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While a solid and engaging read, it does have a flaw that irritated me considerably: the highly repetitive use of 'practiced'. For example, it was used to qualify 'ease', 'efficiency', 'strokes', 'precision', 'movements', 'eye', with some of these, such as 'ease', occurring numerous times.
— Nov 18, 2025 02:14PM
