Dave Stone’s Reviews > All Accounts Settled: Fred the Vampire Accountant #9 > Status Update
Dave Stone
is 60% done
It's better, but...
There are still a lot of amateurish writing tricks, an over reliance on 'tension', and the padding out of some thin ideas.
Overall, I like the larger story arc -but I'm not enamored with the details.
— Nov 19, 2025 04:59AM
There are still a lot of amateurish writing tricks, an over reliance on 'tension', and the padding out of some thin ideas.
Overall, I like the larger story arc -but I'm not enamored with the details.
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Dave Stone
is 20% done
I'll be back after a short break.
Just can't seem to engage with this one. It's classic Fred right enough, but I'm finding it irksome reading.
— Nov 11, 2025 07:10AM
Just can't seem to engage with this one. It's classic Fred right enough, but I'm finding it irksome reading.
