Paulinaaa’s Reviews > The Butterfly Garden > Status Update

That scene on page 130…completely unnecessary.

There is no character development, a lot of POV movement, MC is a pick me girl, I am in no interest to see where this story unfolds. I don’t feel the thriller or the mystery, not even to know who the gardener is. This feels like a wattpad book in the worst sense possible. The plot construction is not good and the writing is also not good IMO.

I am not loving the way it’s written.