Eric’s Reviews > Dungeon Born > Status Update
Eric
is 88% done
The book is now irritating. Part of that is the narrator. But part is the wooden dialog, toxic relationships, and posturing. The book would be much better dramatized because the author is always adding "he exclaimed" or "she shouted miserably" after every line, chopping the book up unnecessarily. And don't get me started on the immature view of sex and relationships. This might be a teen writer.
— Nov 20, 2025 06:24PM
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Eric
is 6% done
I don't like the main character or his companion yet. However, this book is explaining to me the assumptions that underlie other "cultivation" novels. It's so good to finally have the background that other authors assume.
— Nov 06, 2025 07:36PM
