Melina’s Reviews > Brimstone > Status Update

I lied. Kingfisher makes up for everything.

Saeris is pretty annoying to me in these last chapters. The story has been dragging and as I was just thinking about it being really messy and feeling like all the old main characters were basically forgotten-they are mentioned and where they are currently stationed is re-called. With better writing you would not have to list off where all your characters are currently. The writing has dipped quite a bit for me.

I don’t know which enemies to lovers relationship I adore more- KF & carrion’s or KF &Onyx’s! The pine cone, are you kidding me?! So cute!

I’m
Not crying, you’re crying…

Wow. Cant breathe. Chapter 20.

Kingfisher being sweet and talking to Onyx, swoon! 🥹🥹🥹