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Jen
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Why are the texting segments so weird? The person we’re currently in the POV of should be blue to the right. The person they’re texting should be grey to the left. The names of the tester inside the text box makes it read like it’s part of the text.
— Nov 21, 2025 11:57PM
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Jen
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I’m finding it hard to believe that players would be able to volunteer at an all day, week long kids training camp during playoffs…
— Nov 21, 2025 09:57PM
Jen
is on page 43 of 278
I’m finding the book needs a little editing. There’s similar phrases in the same paragraph (same words used).
On page 43, Connor changes gender:
“The look on his face stirred some jealous feelings in Evie. He simply adored Sasha, and it was written all over her face.”
— Nov 21, 2025 03:46PM
On page 43, Connor changes gender:
“The look on his face stirred some jealous feelings in Evie. He simply adored Sasha, and it was written all over her face.”
