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“A muscle leaped in his jaw.”
It did what what now?
— Nov 23, 2025 04:49AM
It did what what now?
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Nov 23, 2025 05:17AM
There’s a point where “show, don’t tell” goes too far. That may be one instance… 😆
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😂 I’m just imagining his muscle jumping like a fish with a life of its own, and then he gets embarrassed and tries to cover it up…
