✨Sarah✨’s Reviews > Brimstone > Status Update

the writing is absolutely horrible. a fighting scene with guards. Examples what could have been written: „Two more of the Guards where coming at me…“ or „Two more Men with swords…“ or „Two more of them were coming with raised swords…“ instead she writes „Two MALE…“ MALE!!! EVERY DAMN TIME! the male said, the male mentioned, the male came, male, male, male….

I swear to all seven gods that if this book is going to be some SJM inspired thing where every third page the word MATE or FEMALE or MALE is written, Imma stop reading Romantasy. I can‘t!!! Stop it already!!!