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Melina
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Saeris is pretty annoying to me in these last chapters. The story has been dragging and as I was just thinking about it being really messy and feeling like all the old main characters were basically forgotten-they are mentioned and where they are currently stationed is re-called. With better writing you would not have to list off where all your characters are currently. The writing has dipped quite a bit for me.
— Nov 25, 2025 01:10PM
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Melina
is on page 590 of 668
It’s giving fever dream. We are all over the place with this plot.
— 16 hours, 6 min ago
Melina
is on page 577 of 668
“It’s something.” Are you for real right now. Why is this happening?
— 23 hours, 42 min ago
Melina
is on page 494 of 668
What happened to Renfis & Everlayne? I was really hoping I’d get something more with them. I guess maybe that’s not happening.
— Nov 26, 2025 08:37AM
Melina
is on page 388 of 668
I don’t know which enemies to lovers relationship I adore more- KF & carrion’s or KF &Onyx’s! The pine cone, are you kidding me?! So cute!
— Nov 24, 2025 12:59PM
