Mary’s Reviews > Offline God: Book One of the Re-Write Cycle > Status Update

Man this is such an awesome idea. I really wish the author hadn’t leaned so heavily on AI to either co-author it or edit it. The entire thing screams AI and the continuity and choice errors are things that probably could have been caught by a human editor at the very least. I’m wavering between finishing it because of the story idea…and DNF’ing it because it sets my teeth on edge.