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madelén
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i think that was the last of the mayfair file chapters and to that i say HALLELUJAH. truly a slogfest to get through, so much telling and next to no showing. inefficient storytelling methinks, there has to be a better way to convey the relevant information to the reader
— 16 hours, 45 min ago
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madelén
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First of all: EWWWWWW
Second: there are sooooo many passages in here that could be posted on r/MenWritingWomen, how on earth was this written by a woman
— Nov 12, 2025 01:01PM
Second: there are sooooo many passages in here that could be posted on r/MenWritingWomen, how on earth was this written by a woman
