Brooke’s Reviews > The Ever King > Status Update
Brooke
is on page 101 of 408
The vibes are vibin. The world building is cool. I could easily stay up too late reading.
Only critique thus far is some of the writing is awkward... too frequently nouns have been used as verbs or adjectives or there are fragmented sentences which messes up my flow, making me go back and reread things frequently but alas I'm here for the vibes 🤙
— Nov 30, 2025 11:12PM
Only critique thus far is some of the writing is awkward... too frequently nouns have been used as verbs or adjectives or there are fragmented sentences which messes up my flow, making me go back and reread things frequently but alas I'm here for the vibes 🤙
Like flag

