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Dave Stone
is 12% done
Might get back to it later. I got so sick of the "I'm not worthy" and the "I'm just a dirty peasant" and even the "I defile this place with my presents"
I get that the author is setting up to contrast with the future, but there won't bee no future if everyone quits in disgust.
A little goes a LONG way, and you laid it on way too thick.
— Dec 01, 2025 06:12AM
I get that the author is setting up to contrast with the future, but there won't bee no future if everyone quits in disgust.
A little goes a LONG way, and you laid it on way too thick.
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Dave Stone
is 27% done
haven't read a page of this all week.
Seems unlikely I'll ever finish.
— Dec 22, 2025 04:29AM
Seems unlikely I'll ever finish.
Dave Stone
is 10% done
10%, unlikely to finish, the self loathing of the MC is hard to stomach.
Yes, as a peasant he was conditioned by the state sponsored religion to view himself as unworthy but Jesus Christ does Icalos rub it in over and over.
Secondly, this is not cozy. There are serious stakes, like the end of the world serious. There are massacres, tragedies, despair, and violent death. -How the hell is that cozy?
— Nov 29, 2025 02:21AM
Yes, as a peasant he was conditioned by the state sponsored religion to view himself as unworthy but Jesus Christ does Icalos rub it in over and over.
Secondly, this is not cozy. There are serious stakes, like the end of the world serious. There are massacres, tragedies, despair, and violent death. -How the hell is that cozy?
