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Sorry I did like Sunburn quite a lot but so far this is just kind of straightforwardly bad and reads as a fairly juvenile and shallow attempt to write a book about Serious Topics. It's possible I could change my mind when the lesbian subplot kicks in though so maybe hold that thought
— Dec 02, 2025 04:58AM
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Dec 04, 2025 05:01AM
To me it seemed like she’d been rushed to get out another book felt a bit unfinished and lacked depth
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Lucy wrote: "To me it seemed like she’d been rushed to get out another book felt a bit unfinished and lacked depth"Yeah it's deffo pretty shallow so far. Tbf I'm not sure Sunburn was much different in that sense but because it was written from Lucy's incredibly emotionally charged perspective it kind of didn't need to be to be engaging.

