Helena’s Reviews > Heap Earth Upon It > Status Update

Helena
Helena is 30% done
Sorry I did like Sunburn quite a lot but so far this is just kind of straightforwardly bad and reads as a fairly juvenile and shallow attempt to write a book about Serious Topics. It's possible I could change my mind when the lesbian subplot kicks in though so maybe hold that thought
Dec 02, 2025 04:58AM
Heap Earth Upon It

2 likes ·  flag

Comments Showing 1-2 of 2 (2 new)

dateUp arrow    newest »

Lucy To me it seemed like she’d been rushed to get out another book felt a bit unfinished and lacked depth


Helena Lucy wrote: "To me it seemed like she’d been rushed to get out another book felt a bit unfinished and lacked depth"

Yeah it's deffo pretty shallow so far. Tbf I'm not sure Sunburn was much different in that sense but because it was written from Lucy's incredibly emotionally charged perspective it kind of didn't need to be to be engaging.


back to top