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I don't love the writing. It's got too many dialogue tags and adverbs; it feels fussy and clunky, and now that I've noticed it, it's going to bother me the rest of the book (or however far I get).
— Nov 30, 2025 07:15PM
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Dec 02, 2025 08:18PM
The cover's not looking hot too.
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Khalid wrote: "The cover's not looking hot too."I don't mind the cover nearly as much as all the smirking, spitting, chin-lifting.
Hopefully nobody spit on the cover?
Left Coast Justin wrote: "Hopefully nobody spit on the cover?"Maybe just me when I'm snorting in disgust. It's got a plastic protective cover, though.
