Sharondblk’s Reviews > The Heir Apparent > Status Update

If you removed all the repetitious commentary from the narrator this book would be both quicker and better.

The structure of this book is not to my liking. It's not dual timeline, it just moves backwards and forwards. At one point I thought my phone must have been playing to itself, and I'd missed a chapter, but no, it was just leaping around in time.
Everyone in this book (except Jack) is pretty horrible.