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cryptid
is on page 155 of 287
So far we are at 15 notated parts that either don’t make sense, are rushed/heavy handed, or poor wording. I still don’t get why they kissed already right after having their first normal even conversation & then trauma dumped on each other. It’s weird
— Dec 05, 2025 10:10PM
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cryptid
is on page 85 of 287
It’s okay. The writing is better. The dialogue is better and less forced. I think my only critique would be that I am confused about Riley‘s reaction to things because they feel more forced to finding out that she has magic than I feel like normal people would be. And I feel like there’s this trend of “I just wanna be normal “vibes when in reality. I don’t think anyone feels that way? It’s not a slog.
— Nov 30, 2025 08:03PM
cryptid
is on page 25 of 287
I currently have four notes in the first chapter. The incorrect usage of the word metastasized is a little weird and so is the fact that she introduces herself as Riley Everett, and people still call her Riley Denton. It’s also kind of weird because our love interest is just immediately hot, but I do like the older female lead. She’s 33. I’m here for this.
— Nov 28, 2025 10:37PM
