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Rebecca
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Super fascinating premise that (for me) fell flat with the overuse of the F-word anytime a character swore, and the stilted dialogue of the characters. The prose was good, but the conversations really botched it up. It was almost as if the writer doesn’t know how real people talk to each other… the different narrators to piece together the story was done well, though..
— Dec 06, 2025 06:30AM
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This book is weird. I don’t quite understand the hype. I think because the premise is really cool and creative but I don’t think the author really quite got there…
— Dec 02, 2025 07:26PM
