Meli’s Reviews > The Hurricane Wars > Status Update

So ur telling me ur gonna just casually forgive the man that ruined your life, got your family and your bestfriend killed, just because he called you beautiful??? If they liked eachother I would forgive it but man oh man this is so stupid

So on one page its raining- but its not rain its actually her crying because she doesnt know why but she has a memory (isnt described) and then one very long paragraph of description that isn't properly seperated later (info dump is crazy I genuinly cant comprehend how a literate person edited this book and was like 🔥🔥) IT STOPS RAINING? but it wasn't raining in the first place 😭