Jared Dangar’s Reviews > On the Shoulders of Titans > Status Update
Jared Dangar
is 48% done
This book is not living up to the potential from the first, even with political bias put aside.
Writer needs to stop explaining the world from character's research, and start explaining abilities through more action scenes.
48% done and only one interesting sequence has happened.
— Dec 07, 2025 03:19AM
Writer needs to stop explaining the world from character's research, and start explaining abilities through more action scenes.
48% done and only one interesting sequence has happened.
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Dec 07, 2025 08:10PM
I thought you weren’t going to keep reading this series?
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