Iain’s Reviews > The Tower Treasure > Status Update
Iain
is 43% done
This story isn't bad, and it's a quick read, but I'm surprised how padded it feels, how much it lingers and doubles back on dialogue and ideas, and how much it feels like cutting it down for the revised edition was maybe a good and necessary idea. It's coming up on 100 years old, yet it feels "second screen optimized" with how it repeats basic info.
— Dec 07, 2025 07:37AM
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