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“Earth’s troposphere is seventy-eight percent nitrogen, twenty-one percent oxygen, and one percent argon,” Jim informed her. “We do not have argon in our world, but sarian. That is what we had to condition your lungs to breathe.” It makes sense at least!

The latest Joffrey attack was pretty sick. Not sure why they even care when they have their own planet now?! I liked how it won Matt brownie points though I'm not sure what they like about 14 yo Kara nor really what she likes about them other than they are hot and like her! I'm leaning toward Jim honestly because they seem to have a more reasoned connection...

So sad Terath did that over a necklace!

I don't believe this feint at all that Narobe is the guilty party, more likely to be misguided Matt than anyone.

The Matt Lorobo mess is getting a little tiring as is the constant health issues Kara has been going through, the latest one an actual murder attempt. I don't find the plot boring at least and it was nice to hear how stealing the children is actually helping the other planet.

No 14 yo talks or thinks like this! "With the new segmentation of her team, Kara questioned whether they would be able to help the floundering team. She was ready to raise a white flag and surrender. In the long run, would her team make things worse for the other group of children; and what consequences were associated with a team unable to promote out of Level One?"

So she meets the Joffray leader on the ship with Narobe. She acquits herself well and the woman agrees to let them go but in future will stop the theft of other earth children. She meets with the Larobo leader to put forth her idea that their old team come together to train other struggling teams. Jim admits her and him have been paired. I liked that he asked her what her feelings were toward Matt!

Not sure why Kara is getting special treatment about the leveling... Brent was rewarded for attacking Matt and Matt only escaped punishment because he didn't instigate it. Special melty filters is a cool idea... the party where she learned the Lorabo family are the ones who decide the harsh treatment was an interesting segue. Now a sudden attack!! What?!?

The level 4 test was cool if a little boring because it was hard to envision the environment. The outcome was unexpected and totally expected, I liked that! The surface visit was cool as well as Brent appearing! The team has officially broken up now though - that's sad. Strong plotting, weak writing is still very consistent but some of the more annoying details are smoothing out!

So, of course Kara and Matt are from opposing families yet despite getting to opt out they return to their teams. Krone was not happy about that... Matt already seems indoctrinated against her family and now you understand his hatred of Jim. The next task with the electrified ceiling and zero great looks like it will be as cool as the Kress game (hopefully no one breaks their neck again!)