ainsley’s Reviews > When the World Tips Over > Status Update

Do you want your novel to transform me into an endless ball of rage? All you need are these four attributes!

1. Bad parenting! It’s annoying! It’s not character building! This man sucks! He isn’t someone to be looking up to!
2. Obfuscating for the sake of obfuscation. Why! COMMUNICATE!
3. Love triangles with brothers. Gross! Weird! Pick one!
4. NOT WRITING THE PIVOTAL ENDING SCENE


Anyway the writing was good