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the only downside so far has been that if something is going to happening in the plot the context is explained. then, when that thing is about to happen in the plot the context is explained again. THEN, when the thing actually happens in the plot it is explained again. since there are two POVs this occurs double. there’s just too much over explaining. we don’t the same thing said over and over and over again