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Sharky
Sharky is on page 121 of 517
The run on sentences are crazy. Again with the prose, I’m feeling like the way this is written reads very juvenile? Like I’ve read fanfics about Minecraft with nicer sentence structure and less corny dialogue.

A lot of things so far have felt like convenient plot devices to ensure Violet succeeds, it doesn’t exactly feel earned. Also, it seems like these teachers promise retribution but don’t give it??
Dec 11, 2025 01:25AM
Fourth Wing (The Empyrean, #1)

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Sharky
Sharky is on page 131 of 517
Dain. Brother. Get the fuck out, for the love of EVERYTHING I truly hope he isn’t an actual love interest because his ass is so annoying
Dec 11, 2025 01:36AM
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Sharky
Sharky is on page 91 of 517
I’m not really jiving with this prose, it feels almost corny to me? Lots of cliches building I fear. I’m enjoying it a little more now that I’m not taking it seriously, but like… what. is. going. on.
Dec 11, 2025 12:57AM
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Sharky
Sharky is on page 71 of 517
I. Hate. These. Sentences.

Violet is very much giving fanfic Mary-Sue. The EYEROLL she got from me after that “for once I’m grateful to be shorter than most” line was major 😭

Also there’s so much cliche dialogue? I think if I reframe reading this like watching a corny movie maybe I’ll have more fun, I just can’t take it seriously ://
Dec 09, 2025 03:19PM
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Sharky
Sharky is on page 60 of 517
Finishing my thoughts before I start the next chapter, more as a reference for me after I finish the book:

Violet will be somehow naturally be good at everything, even though narratively we’ve been told she’s been trained for something else her whole life

Xaden will be her love interest and they’ll have an enemies to lovers arc or something, potentially a love triangle with Dain

She gets a special dragon
Dec 09, 2025 09:42AM
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Sharky
Sharky is on page 60 of 517
I am so sorry to all the Fourth Wing enjoyers out there but I am struggling with this book already 😭 it’s only the first chapter though, so my feelings could change. My feelings, though, so far:

1. Violet is giving “my mom sold me to One Direction” energy. She’s teeny-tiny and has cool unique hair and is so pale..ok

2. Xaden (god help us) is definitely a love interest isn’t he
Dec 09, 2025 09:36AM
Fourth Wing (The Empyrean, #1)


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