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Will
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Ch12 rocks. Clever, fun, exciting. At times really feels like a slideshow done by an odd child; at others strays into a cadence that feels too elevated (238, 251, 273, 286), but basically convincing. Timing of Rob reveal (272) feels great. Alison has her own imagined visit from the goon squad on 299, which is cool. Desert as pause also cool. Pauses are good topic for book so much about time.
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— Dec 12, 2025 08:41PM
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stylistically alright, formally awesome (maybe in both the old-fashioned literal sense and the male teenage skateboarding sense), content fine but definitely shining moments!
— Dec 10, 2025 09:19AM
Will
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So far style and content are only sorta interesting to me.
Very well written in that it’s easy to read.
Chapter 4, section 2 is fun and clever: starting to see the vision.
— Dec 08, 2025 09:45AM
Very well written in that it’s easy to read.
Chapter 4, section 2 is fun and clever: starting to see the vision.
